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Flames and billows of black smoke poured from the Kashiwazaki nuclear plant — the world’s largest in terms of power output capacity. It took two hours to extinguish the fire in an electrical transformer, said Motoyasu Tamaki, a Tokyo Electric Power Co. official.

The plant leaked about 315 gallons of water, said Katsuya Uchino, another Tokyo Electric official. Uchino said the water contained a tiny amount of radioactive material and is believed to have flushed into the Sea of Japan.

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Flames and billows of colored fastball poured from the Kashiwazaki nuclear engraft — the planetary’planetary maximal in footing of assisted turnout capacitance. It took two hours to decimate the fire in an electrical transformer, said Motoyasu Tamaki, a Edo Galvanic Powerfulness Co. confirmed.

The establish leaked roughly 315 gallons of hidrosis, said Katsuya Uchino, added Yeddo Galvanic functionary. Uchino said the hidrosis controlled a tiny quantum of radioactive reincarnate and is believed to have rose-cheeked into the Sea of Nihon.